话题分析
本单元的话题是“社区与邻里”,让学生了解自己的邻居和自己生活的环境,感受邻里之间的互助与关爱,鼓励学生积极参与社区活动,主动为邻里和社区作贡献,践行共享互助理念,共建文明和谐社区。写作时首先要想好写哪些方面的内容,即社区中心的人们常见的一些活动,最后要表达自己对社区中心的评价或感想。在写作时可列出提纲,然后收集相关信息、组织词句,要充分运用自己所学的单词及句型。
素材积累
开头句
1. I live in a beautiful and quiet neighbourhood.
2. I'd like to share my idea of helping our community with you.
中间句
1. My parents and I live on the eighth floor in a tall building.
2. People often do sport and chat with each other under the trees.
3. We will raise money for the plants in our community.
结尾句
1. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
2. It is lucky for us to live in a neighbourhood like this.
谚语积累
1. Neighbours are safe, and we are safe.
邻居平安,自己也平安。
2. Neighbours are inseparable; distant relatives are inseparable.
近邻不可断,远亲不可疏。
经典例题
根据要点提示以“My neighbourhood”为题写一篇短文,词数70左右,可适当发挥。
【要点】1. What's your neighbourhood like?
2. What's in your neighbourhood?
3. ...(用1至2句话发表你对本小区的看法)
My neighbourhood
写作指导
1. 用第一人称来写。
2. 时态为“一般现在时”。
3. 要写出小区的环境和人们的生活状况。
写作模板

遣词造句
1. 这儿的空气是新鲜的,因为社区周围有许多的花和树。(because)
The air here is fresh because there are many flowers and trees around the neighbourhood.
2. 小区离市中心不远,乘坐公交车只需半小时就可到达。(It takes some time...)
The neighbourhood is not far from the city centre. It takes only half an hour to get there by bus.
3. 他们经常在周末分享他们不同的技能。(share their different skills)
They often share their different skills at weekends.
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