写作专项提优
【话题分析】
本单元的写作话题是“奇幻故事”,主要讨论或阅读古今中外的奇幻故事。其写作的命题形式主要有:1. 介绍自己喜欢的故事以及感受;2. 根据题目要求编写一个故事并体现一定的寓意;3. 讨论阅读的好处。
【范文赏析】
一、例题
(2025·连云港一模改编)好的故事可以触动心灵、启迪智慧;好的故事可以引人入胜,温暖人心;好的故事可以……。初中三年,我们或许读过、听过、见证过很多好的故事。请以“The good story in my heart”为题写一篇短文参赛。
Q1:Which is the good story in your heart?
Q2:What is it about?
Q3:Why do you like that good story or what can you learn from the good story?
注意事项:1. 词数 100 左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);2. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
The good story in my heart
A good story can travel in time and space.
二、写作策略
写这篇文章时,学生需要先确定一个自己熟悉且觉得好的故事,比如经典的寓言故事或名人故事,符合“触动心灵、启迪智慧”“引人入胜,温暖人心”等特点。在文章的开头,学生要点明故事是什么。文章的主体要讲述故事的主要内容。文章的最后要根据故事表达喜爱的原因或收获。
三、范文
... I want to share you something about the good story in my heart—the story of Mencius' Mother Moving Three Times.
When Mencius was a little boy, he learned how to mourn in the place where they lived
at first. His mother thought it was not good for his study, so she decided to move.
Then, they moved to a place next to a market, and Mencius began to learn the ways of business people. His mother didn't want him to be a businessman, so they moved again.
Finally, they moved into a house near a school. Mencius began to learn knowledge from school. His mother thought this was the right place for him to grow up.
按照孟母三次搬家的时间顺序,依次描述孟子的变化和每次搬家的原因,把故事完整且有条理地呈现出来。
I think it is an educational and meaningful story. Through this story I know the environment can make a big difference to us.
学到的道理和上文呼应,有理有据。