习作主题精练
【话题分析】
同学们，本单元我们走进了灰姑娘的童话故事，学会了一些用来表达故事情节的句式结构。我们知道了 why 和 because 的用法，也复习了动词的第三人称单数形式。请结合学过的知识，根据图示用自己的话写一写灰姑娘的故事吧。
【写作指导】
开头：介绍人物和故事的起因。
主体：按照情节发展顺序描述内容。
结尾：点明故事的结局，并做出总结。
参考词句：
Cinderella is a nice/beautiful... girl.
There is a party at the prince's house.
Cinderella can't go to the party because...
Cinderella puts on...
Cinderella has a good time...
【参考范文】
Cinderella is a nice girl. There is a party at the prince's house. She can't go there because she does not have any nice clothes or shoes. She is sad. Then a fairy comes and helps her. She goes to the party and has a good time with the prince.
【精彩点评】
1. 提炼关键情节，使用学过的单词、短语和句型进行复述。
2. 按故事情节发展顺序描写，条理清晰。
3. 使用 because，then 等连词，使得上下文衔接自然，有连贯性且完整。
4. 句式有变化，不单一。如 there be 句型、第三人称单数陈述句、肯定句和否定句等。
【小试身手】
一、句型热身。
A. 汉译英。
1. 海伦不得不早点回家。
Helen has to go back home early.
2. 这条短裙不适合她，因为它不是她的。
This skirt doesn't fit her, because it's not hers.
B. 同义句转换。
1. They are bad for them.
They are not good for them.
2. Cinderella wants to try on the shoe.
Cinderella would like to try on the shoe.
3. Bobby does not have any mushrooms.
Bobby has no mushrooms.
二、写作练习。
以上范文并未将灰姑娘的故事讲述完整，你能进行续写吗？请根据课文内容，并展开合理想象，写一写灰姑娘和王子之后的故事。
提示：twelve o'clock；go back；leave... behind；shoe；visit；try on；fit
Cinderella should go back home before twelve o'clock. She says goodbye to the prince and runs away quickly. She leaves one of her shoes behind. The prince wants to find her. He visits every house.
Many girls try on the shoe, but it doesn't fit.
Finally, Cinderella tries it on. It fits! The prince and Cinderella live together finally.
