Dear Mr Zhang,
I really hope that you can read my letter. We have built our town into a civilized(文明的、开化的) one. As a middle school student, I feel proud of(为...感到骄傲) it. To make our hometown better, I want to do something for it.
I'm amazed that great changes have taken place(发生、举行) in our town in the past few years. People's lives have improved greatly. The air is fresh, and we can smell the flowers(闻到花香) and hear the birds sing. The town is becoming cleaner and tidier and looks very beautiful.
However, there are still some things that we need to improve. The streets near schools are always crowded(拥挤的) and some people don't wait in line(排队) when they get on(上车) the bus.
I think we can try to do(尝试去做) something to make them better. First, we should encourage students to ride to school instead of(而不是) going to school by car. Second, people should be educated to be good citizens.
I hope my letter is of some help(有帮助的) to improve our town and make it nicer and more beautiful in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高分句型:
①I think we can try to do something to make them better.我想我们可以试着做些什么来让他们变得更好。
(try to do sth. 尝试做某事;make sth. better 使某事更好;不定式to make表示目的)
②I hope my letter is of some help to improve our town and make it nicer and more beautiful in the future. 我希望我的信对改善我们的小镇有所帮助,使它在未来变得更加美好和美丽。
(“be of +名词”相当于这个名词的形容词;“make sth.+形容词”表示“使某物/事怎么样”)